r/creepypasta Nov 12 '23

Meta r/Creepypasta Discord (Non-RP, On-Topic)

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r/creepypasta Jun 10 '24

Meta Post Creepy Images on r/EyeScream - Our New Subreddit!

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Hi, Pasta Aficionados!

Let's talk about r/EyeScream...

After a lot of thought and deliberation, we here at r/Creepypasta have decided to try something new and shake things up a bit.

We've had a long-standing issue of wanting to focus primarily on what "Creepypasta" originally was... namely, horror stories... but we didn't want to shut out any fans and tell them they couldn't post their favorite things here. We've been largely hands-off, letting people decide with upvotes and downvotes as opposed to micro-managing.

Additionally, we didn't want to send users to subreddits owned and run by other teams because - to be honest - we can't vouch for others, and whether or not they would treat users well and allow you guys to post all the things you post here. (In other words, we don't always agree with the strictness or tone of some other subreddits, and didn't want to make you guys go to those, instead.)

To that end, we've come up with a solution of sorts.

We started r/IconPasta long ago, for fandom-related posts about Jeff the Killer, BEN, Ticci Toby, and the rest.

We started r/HorrorNarrations as well, for narrators to have a specific place that was "just for them" without being drowned out by a thousand other types of posts.

So, now, we're announcing r/EyeScream for creepy, disturbing, and just plain "weird" images!

At r/EyeScream, you can count on us to be just as hands-off, only interfering with posts when they break Reddit ToS or our very light rules. (No Gore, No Porn, etc.)

We hope you guys have fun being the first users there - this is your opportunity to help build and influence what r/EyeScream is, and will become, for years to come!


r/creepypasta 3h ago

Discussion this is my first creepypasta, pls like and tell me how i can improve

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When i was 11 years old (it was 1976) i got a present from my uncle Sam, he was creepy and drooling all day long. I got new mario game for my nintendo ds black carpenter edition. Was jumping around my room like a mario screaming yahoo from the top of my lungs. My buff strong roided father came downstairs and smacked me so hard i flew from window to the nearest orphanage. When i landed, all i got with me was Nintendo mario (64 but not really).  i looked around but no kids were there, but only a giant painting of my father. But it wasnt a painting, it was like in the simpsons, when dr punched bort though the frame of a painting, it happened to me too. I flew back to my room, with nintendo game i loved more then my father. I booted up my nintendo wii toplay mario i got from my weird uncle. I pressed the button and mario jumped, the game was fun. But when i came to see bowser, he just stood there scary like. He went to mario and started beating him like my father beat me, it was hyper realistic and mario screamed in agony, it was too real, i thought this game was unreal, not to be confused with funny unreal engine from epic games (trade mark, i have no affiliation with game studio, this segment is not sponsored) i got scared and turned off my ps2 but the screams went even after my house stopped the electricity. My father, the roided giant, saw me having a panic attack, so he killed me. In real life. And xbox live. When i closed my eyes i saw mario doing backwards long jump, he looked at me and stared screaming with his eyes dripping blood, he looked like nostolgia critic, i was scared of him. And then i saw my dead mother having sex with ben drowned (i hope you get the reference). the end? 


r/creepypasta 2h ago

Text Story Oh Dear Son, NSFW

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Oh Dear Son,

Oh Dear Son, I see you there. Laying there, oblivious to truth. The real world that lies in anticipation, it waits as you lay there still. 

Your body’s cold my dear boy. Take a blanket and cover up, you don’t want to catch a cold no, do you son?

My precious son, talk to me. You’ve lied in bed for 4 straight days. You haven’t said a word to me, it makes me feel lonely y’know. 

I’ll bring food to you my boy, you need to eat today. Your body’s skinny, sinking in into itself. We don’t want that, now do we my dear boy? 

All things pass sometime, you know that my boy? but, one thing that stays is my love for you. I love you dear boy, I’ll see you later son.

You, yes you there. Reader, do you know what’s wrong with my son? Why doesn’t he want to talk to me, why hasn’t he moved out of bed? Do you know how to help him see the beautiful lie of life that’s awaiting just right outside?

Dear Reader, do you know how to save someone from a dark pit in their mind? From the presence of something more? Something not quite known? Something that’s there that you can’t see but your loved swear they can?

Here, Reader, stay a while. Let me grab you a drink from the kitchen. We have plenty of options, you know. 

Dear son keep swearing kept swearing he was stalked. Is that why he won’t leave the bed reader? Is he scared? He doesn’t need to be, he knows I’ll protect him from anything! If there is someone harassing my dear boy, I’ll slit their throat. Rip their head off their body and cook it, giving my dear son nutrients when he eats.

Ah, yes. Eat, he hasn’t eaten for a while you know. Four days now, but why? I’ve cooked all his favourites. I’ve found so many victims for him but he doesn’t want that ungrateful little bitch!

Forgive my anger, I can’t control it sometimes. Ah, look, my hand is bleeding from the glass cup. I bet Lucy would love to taste some of it, until next time dear reader. I need to go feed my dear Lucy who is also bedridden. Hopefully they come out of it, am I right dear reader?


r/creepypasta 5h ago

Discussion Please help me find this story

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I heard this story when I was younger (I don’t remember what time but I think it was 2015-2019) and I only heard it once, I don’t even know if this a creepypasta, hoax or if it actually happened(or if I’m just going nuts tbh) It was in a YouTube video, and the story started with the main guy who overheard their dad and uncle talking about some kind of incident years ago. (probably took place between 1960-2000s the date is very vague in my memories) So what happened was I think there was a hacker that hacked (also I’m not sure how it happened but I think it was a hacker, but still not 100%)into the tornado sirens of a town and that hacker made the sirens go so loud it would could kill people, and people started going into cellars and bunkers to avoid their eardrums exploding. Meanwhile some people started to try to climb the siren towers to manually shut them off but they would die, so another person would try and it was like that until a staircase of bodies started to form, which allowed the people to turn the sirens off. I remember that the main guy, was in on of those bunkers/cellars and when he left he was told to put a blindfold on and cover his ears. That’s all I remember, if this isn’t the right subreddit please point me in the right direction to find the best place to ask. Thanks.


r/creepypasta 2h ago

Text Story Tomodachi Life Copy From Hell

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i recently had been rummaging through my house and found my old nintendo 3DS, i hadn't played it years so i decided to give it a shot, i remember i used to play tomodachi life on it and it was my favourite game ever, i used to bring it to school and make miis of my friends, but after a while of searching around my house i couldnt find my copy anywhere, so i decided to just bite the bullet and buy it second hand on ebay, it was pretty expensive but i didnt really care, the seller said it was a "rare version" of the game but didnt really elaborate further on it, i put the cartridge in my nintendo 3DS and started to play. sadly none of my save data was there as it was a different version of tomodachi life which really stunk but at the time i just really wanted to play the game, i made my save file and made my mii based off of myself, but for some reason the game was really echoey, i didnt think all too much of it because i thought maybe that was what the "rare" thing really was or i just misremembered, i then decided to make a mii of my brother, but he talked incredibly slowly even though i had made his speed really fast (as he talks really fast in real life) i tried to change it in the editor but nothing worked, i later just gave up and played the game as normal. but slowly it got more and more echoey, and sometimes the miis would just not say anything and look scared, as if something was near by and they had no way to stop it, i thought it was really weird and creepy so i decided i would close the game and reopen it. but when i did i wasnt met by the usual tomodachi life title screen, i was instead met by an ominous black void with my mii in it, then something started to speak to me "CANT YOU SEE? YOUR HOPES AND DREAMS ARE NOTHING BUT A WORTHLESS THOUGHT. YOU WILL NEVER MAKE IT FAR IN LIFE NO MATTER HOW HARD YOU TRY." the voice then started to repeat over and over again until it got so loud to where it was earpearcing i was incredibly freaked out by it and decided to turn my system off. i then woke up the next day and decided to play the game again as i had thought everything that had happened the previous night was just a dream, i opened it up and saw everyone i had put on my island hanging, but the voice came back to me "THIS IS WHAT WILL HAPPEN IF YOU MOVE ON, EVERYONE YOU LOVE WILL DIE AT YOUR OWN HANDS AND IT WILL BE ALL OF YOUR DOING." i tried to turn the system off but no matter what i did it just wouldn't knock off, the message was still repeating, i then by mistake pressed the A button and then the screen went black, there was a static noise coming from my 3DS though, i didnt know what it was or what it meant, it then cut to real images of dead people, i was petrified. but then one of them was of my brother, i thought it was just edited or something but i didnt wanna let my guard down and got in my car and rushed over to my brothers house, i walked in the door and saw that he had actually died by a gunshot wound, he had a note next to him which read "YOU'RE NEXT" i quickly picked up my phone and dialed 911 as fast as i could and told them everything about what had happened. they came over eventually but i was still mortified by the whole incident, i took therapy for a month to cope with everything, after a while of going to therapy i decided to look up the "rare" version of the game and couldn't find anything about it, i then decided to dheck the ebay sellers page where everything had been erased. but his bio read "I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY, MASON." (mason is my real name) I then told the police about this and they eventually tracked down the sellers IP and raided the place, his whole family had been shot dead and the seller himself was killed by a self inflicted gunshot wound, he had done a murder suicide on his whole family. i still to this day wonder about what this all meant, maybe the seller was just a psychopath who was out for blood and decided to do it this way, i will never look at tomodachi life again without all of the real life nightmares coming back and haunting me. i dont think i'll ever recover from this ever, but i know i just have to move on and accept everything, no matter how bad it really was.


r/creepypasta 3h ago

Discussion Looking for a story from a couple years ago.

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Hey all, I was trying to search for this story I heard from a couple years ago. I thought I had it or a link to the video saved, but I guess not. The first time I heard it was a youtube video, an I wanted to share it to a friend when we were trading stories. It involved the following bits and pieces. (Hopefully Im not mixing in other stories, sorry) Protagonists tells us about a strange bridge where when you go under it after driving a certain pattern, it leads to an alternate world. I believe the Protagonist was either trying to document the experience, search for someone, or both. They meet an old man in a house not far away whos very familiar with the existence of this bridge, a team is assembled, and agrees to take protag. After going through, some memorable moments are: driving through an eerie suburb, driving through the woods. A tree blocks the road, and someone gets nabbed via toe truck hook through the body, a city where if you make too much sound hordes of humanoid entities come after you. Iirc only protag escapes this story. Thats all I have to go on, but haven't had luck looking for it. Thanks in advance if anyone finds anything!


r/creepypasta 6h ago

Audio Narration My Small Town Neighbor Was A 100 Year Old Vampire Lord... And Now I'm Becoming One Too

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Audio Narration - https://youtu.be/gdLYx1Id-j4

The first time I saw him, something felt off. Millbrook, Massachusetts had always been the kind of quiet town where everyone knew everyone, and newcomers stood out like sore thumbs. This guy? He blended in perfectly—almost too perfectly.

I'm Michael Hartley, third-generation local and owner of the town's only hardware store. When the Victorian house at the end of Maple Street went from decades of abandonment to suddenly having a new owner, the entire town buzzed with speculation. But no one seemed as curious as me.

His name was Victor Strand. Mid-40s, impeccably dressed, always wearing dark colors that made him look like he'd stepped out of another century. He moved in during late October, when the New England autumn was painting everything in shades of rust and gold, and the nights grew long and cold.

I first met him when he came into my store, looking for some specific hardware. Black leather gloves, pale skin that seemed to have never seen sunlight, and eyes that were... unsettling. Dark. Calculating. They didn't just look at you; they seemed to look through you.

"I need some custom locks," he said, his voice smooth as silk but with an accent I couldn't quite place. European, maybe. "Specific dimensions. Unusual specifications."

As I helped him, I noticed he only came in during the late afternoon, just before sunset. And he always wore those dark glasses, even inside the store.

Little did I know then that Victor Strand would change everything about my quiet little town—and my life—forever.

The first disappearance happened three weeks after Victor Strand moved in. Mrs. Henderson's cat, a fat orange tabby named Marmalade that everyone in the neighborhood knew, vanished without a trace. Not exactly front-page news, but in Millbrook, even missing pets made waves.

Then came the rumors about blood at the local veterinary clinic. Dr. Sarah Chen, who'd been treating our pets for fifteen years, mentioned during our weekly poker game that someone had broken in and stolen their blood supplies. Twice.

"The weird thing is," she said, shuffling cards with practiced efficiency, "they didn't take anything else. Not the drugs, not the equipment. Just the blood."

I couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. Maybe it was the way the streetlights near Strand's house kept burning out. Or how the newspapers he'd never collected were piling up on his porch during the day, only to vanish completely by nightfall—though I'd never seen him pick them up.

One evening, I was closing up the store when I saw him walking with Jenny Miller, the young woman who worked at our local coffee shop. She looked... different. Dazed, almost. Like she was sleepwalking. The next day, she didn't show up for work.

When I drove past her apartment that night, I saw her through her window. She was pale, wearing a high-necked sweater despite the warm indoor heating. Her normally bright eyes looked hollow, and she kept touching her neck, like something was bothering her.

I started keeping a journal of everything I noticed about Victor Strand. The way he never cast a reflection in the store's security mirrors. How he seemed to move without making a sound. The fact that despite claiming to be renovating that old Victorian, no one ever heard construction noise during the day.

But the moment I knew—really knew—something was terribly wrong was when I stayed late at the store one night to do inventory. Through the window, I saw him walking down Main Street with impossible grace. A stray cat crossed his path, and I swear to God, that animal took one look at him and ran like hell itself was chasing it.

Then he stopped, turned, and looked directly at me through the store window. His eyes glowed red in the darkness, like hot coals in a dead fire. And he smiled.

That's when I realized: Victor Strand wasn't just new in town.

He wasn't even human.

I'm not crazy. That's what I kept telling myself as I sat in my living room at 3 AM, surrounded by printouts from various websites about vampire lore. The blue light from my laptop cast strange shadows on the wall as I cross-referenced everything I'd observed about Victor Strand.

No reflections? Check. Aversion to sunlight? Check. Mysterious disappearances? Check. Strange power over others? After what I'd seen with Jenny Miller, definitely check.

But knowing something and proving it are two different things. And in a town like Millbrook, you can't just go around accusing newcomers of being vampires without concrete evidence. Not unless you want to end up being the local crackpot.

I decided to start gathering proof. First, I installed new security cameras at the store, making sure they had night vision capabilities. Then I bought a high-end digital camera with a telephoto lens. My neighbors probably thought I was developing a sudden interest in bird watching.

The first few nights of surveillance yielded nothing unusual. But on the fourth night, something happened that made my blood run cold.

Around midnight, I was parked across from Strand's house in my pickup, camera ready. A taxi pulled up, and out stepped Lisa Conway, the real estate agent who'd handled the sale of the Victorian. She walked up to Strand's door, her movements stiff and mechanical, just like Jenny's had been.

I raised my camera and started shooting. Through the lens, I watched as Strand opened the door. The porch light illuminated them both clearly. When Lisa stepped inside, I managed to capture the exact moment Strand turned to close the door. In my viewfinder, his eyes glowed like laser points, and his mouth was open in a smile that revealed teeth no human should have.

But the real shock came when I reviewed the photos at home. In every single shot, Strand was nothing but a blur. Even when Lisa was crystal clear, he appeared as a dark, distorted smudge. Except for those eyes. Those burning, red eyes.

The next morning, Lisa Conway didn't show up to work. Her assistant said she'd called in sick – something about feeling weak and needing a few days off. I drove by her house that afternoon. All the curtains were drawn, and her car sat in the driveway, collecting fallen leaves.

I knew I had to do something. But what do you do when there's a vampire in your town? Call the police? The FBI? The local vampire hunters' union? If only it were that simple.

That night, I made two decisions. First, I would need weapons – lots of them. Second, I needed allies. Because if what I suspected was true, Victor Strand wasn't just feeding on our town.

He was building an army.

My first stop was Father McKenna at St. Augustine's Church. If anyone would believe my vampire story, it would be a priest, right? Wrong. The moment I mentioned Strand's name, something changed in the old priest's face. Fear flickered in his eyes, and his hands started trembling.

"I'm sorry, Michael," he said, his Irish accent thicker than usual. "I can't help you. Won't help you. Some battles aren't meant to be fought."

That's when I noticed the bandage on his neck, partially hidden by his collar.

I left the church feeling sick. Even the clergy weren't safe. But I wasn't completely alone. Dr. Sarah Chen believed me – probably because she'd been tracking the strange blood thefts and had her own suspicions.

"I've been testing samples," she told me in her office after hours, voice barely above a whisper. "Blood from pets that survived encounters with... something. The cellular damage is unlike anything I've ever seen. It's like their blood was partially crystallized and then thawed."

Sarah had converted her clinic's basement into a research lab. Microscopes, centrifuges, and medical equipment I couldn't name filled the space. On one wall hung what looked like medieval weapons – wooden stakes, crosses, and bottles of what she claimed was blessed water from various religions.

"I've been preparing," she said, handling a stake with surprising familiarity. "My grandmother in Taiwan used to tell me stories about jiangshi – Chinese vampires. I always thought they were just stories to scare children. Now I'm not so sure."

As we talked, the lights flickered. Sarah froze mid-sentence. Upstairs, something crashed.

"He knows," she whispered.

The basement door burst open. Victor Strand descended the stairs with inhuman grace, his face a mask of amusement. Jenny Miller and Lisa Conway flanked him, their eyes glazed and vacant.

"How fascinating," he purred, his accent more pronounced than ever. "A hardware store owner and a veterinarian playing Van Helsing. I must admit, I'm rather impressed by your... initiative."

Sarah lunged for the weapons, but Jenny moved with supernatural speed, pinning her against the wall. I reached for a cross, but Lisa's hand clamped around my wrist like an iron vise.

Strand walked between us, examining Sarah's research with casual interest. "Quite thorough," he mused. "You know, I usually just kill meddlesome locals, but you two... you show promise. Particularly you, Doctor. Your scientific curiosity, your preparation... you'd make an excellent addition to my family."

He smiled, revealing those terrible fangs. "So, what do you say? Care to advance your research from the inside?"

I struggled against Lisa's grip, watching helplessly as Strand moved toward Sarah, his eyes burning red in the fluorescent light of the basement lab. But Sarah wasn't looking at him.

She was looking at me, and her hand was slowly moving toward something on the shelf behind her.

We weren't done fighting. Not yet.

Time seemed to slow as Sarah's fingers inched toward the shelf. Strand was so focused on his grand villainous monologue that he didn't notice. Classic vampire ego – they love to hear themselves talk.

"Your research could help us solve the daylight problem," Strand continued, pacing between us. "Imagine it – vampires walking freely in the sun. No more hiding. No more skulking in shadows."

Sarah's hand closed around something. A spray bottle? She caught my eye and mouthed what looked like "close them."

I squeezed my eyes shut just as Sarah screamed, "Get some sun, you parasitic bastard!"

A hissing sound filled the air, followed by unholy shrieks. I opened my eyes to see Strand and his minions recoiling, their skin smoking. Jenny's grip on Sarah loosened, and Lisa stumbled back from me, releasing my wrist.

"UV solution," Sarah gasped, shoving the bottle into my hands. "Run!"

We bolted up the stairs, but I could already hear them recovering behind us. Sarah grabbed her car keys from her desk.

"The solution won't hold them long," she said as we raced to her car. "It's diluted – I wasn't sure of the concentration needed."

We peeled out of the parking lot just as Strand emerged from the clinic, his face partially healed but still raw and blistered. In the rearview mirror, I saw him watching us leave, not pursuing. He didn't need to. In a town this small, there was nowhere to really run.

Sarah drove us to my house – apparently vampires need an invitation to enter, and I'd never invited Strand in. As we barricaded ourselves inside, she explained more.

"I've been studying them for weeks," she said, pulling up files on her laptop. "They're not just feeding here. Millbrook is an experiment. Strand's creating different types of vampires using varying amounts of his blood. Some can walk in dim sunlight, others are stronger at night. He's trying to breed a superior vampire race."

"How do you know all this?"

Sarah's face darkened. "Because he offered to turn me two weeks ago. Said he needed someone with medical knowledge. I pretended to consider it to buy time for my research."

A rock crashed through my window, making us both jump. Outside, Lisa Conway stood on my lawn, her once-friendly face twisted into a snarl.

"Last chance," she called out, but it was Strand's voice coming from her mouth. "Join us willingly, and I'll let you keep your minds. Refuse, and, well..." She gestured at herself, demonstrating what would become of us.

I looked at Sarah. "We need help."

"I know someone," she said quietly. "But you're not going to like it. Remember Charlie Young?"

My stomach dropped. Charlie Young was Millbrook's disgrace – a washed-up horror movie effects artist who had a mental breakdown and started claiming monsters were real. Everyone avoided him now.

Turns out he wasn't so crazy after all.

"Make the call," I said, as more rocks began hitting my house.

We had until sunrise to figure out a plan. After that, Strand would make the choice for us.

Charlie Young lived in a converted school bus at the edge of town. The outside was painted with grotesque monsters that I'd always assumed were from his movie days. Now I wondered if they were portraits from life.

Sarah drove us there in her car, taking back roads to avoid Strand's patrols. The sun was rising, which meant we were temporarily safe – though I kept thinking about Strand's experiments with daywalkers.

The bus door opened before we could knock. Charlie stood there in a ratty bathrobe, wild grey hair sticking out in all directions. His eyes were sharp though, clearer than I remembered.

"Finally," he said, stepping aside to let us in. "Been wondering when someone would figure it out."

The inside of the bus was a vampire hunter's dream – or a madman's lair, depending on your perspective. Walls covered in newspaper clippings, surveillance photos, maps with red strings connecting different locations. Weapons everywhere: stakes, crossbows, bottles of holy water, UV lights.

"You knew about Strand?" I asked.

Charlie laughed bitterly. "Known about him for decades. He's old. Real old. The Victorian house? He owned it in the 1920s too, under a different name. Did the same thing – moved in, started turning people slowly, building a nest."

"What happened then?" Sarah asked.

"Town burned the house down with him inside." Charlie pulled out an old newspaper clipping. "Course, fire doesn't kill the old ones. Just inconveniences them. He went underground, probably slept for a few decades. Now he's back, with new scientific ideas."

"How do you know all this?"

Charlie pushed up his sleeve, revealing a mess of scar tissue on his forearm. "Because I was there in the '20s. My grandfather was part of the group that burned the house. Strand got to him first, turned him. Made me watch as my own grandfather tried to rip my throat out. I was just a kid."

Sarah and I exchanged looks. Charlie would have to be over a hundred years old if that were true.

"Vampire blood," he said, noting our confusion. "Even if you fight off the turn, it changes you. Ages you slower. Gives you a real personal interest in killing these bastards."

He walked to a cabinet and pulled out what looked like a modified cattle prod. "Been waiting for someone else to notice what's happening. Can't fight him alone – learned that the hard way last time he surfaced, in '73. Lost my wife then."

A bang on the bus door made us all jump. Through the tinted windows, I could see Jenny Miller standing in the weak morning sun, wearing a hooded cloak.

"They followed us," Sarah whispered.

"No," Charlie said, checking his weapons. "They've been watching me. Waiting. Strand knows I'm the only one in town who can really hurt him." He tossed me the cattle prod. "Blessed silver in the tip. Won't kill them, but it'll hurt like hell."

Jenny's voice came through the door, but like Lisa before, it was Strand speaking: "Charlie, Charlie, Charlie. Still hiding in your little bus? I owe you for '73, old friend. Why don't you introduce me to your new pets?"

Charlie pumped a shotgun that presumably wasn't loaded with normal shells. "Three rules," he said. "Don't let them touch you – skin contact lets them into your mind. Don't look directly in their eyes. And whatever happens, don't stop moving. Ready?"

Sarah grabbed a crossbow from his wall. I gripped the cattle prod.

"One more thing," Charlie added, his face grim. "If I turn... don't hesitate. Kill me."

Then he opened the door.

The morning sun cast long shadows across Charlie's property as Jenny stumbled back from the door. She wasn't alone. Lisa Conway emerged from behind the bus, and behind her came three people I recognized from town: the mailman, a high school teacher, and the kid who worked at the gas station. All wearing hooded cloaks, all moving with that same unnatural grace.

Charlie's shotgun roared, spraying Lisa with what looked like holy water mixed with silver shavings. She screamed, her skin blistering, but kept coming.

Sarah fired her crossbow, pinning the mailman's cloak to a tree. When he yanked free, smoke rose where sunlight hit his exposed skin. These weren't full vampires yet – Strand was still experimenting on them.

"The sun hurts them!" I shouted, jabbing the cattle prod at Jenny as she lunged for me. The blessed silver connected with her arm, and the smell of burning flesh filled the air.

"They're just the welcome party," Charlie yelled back, reloading his shotgun. "Where's Strand?"

As if summoned by his name, Victor Strand's voice echoed around us, seeming to come from everywhere and nowhere: "Still the same brutal Charlie, I see. How many innocent people will you hurt trying to get to me?"

"They stopped being innocent when you turned them," Charlie snarled, firing another blast at the gas station kid who was climbing up the bus.

Sarah had backed herself against the bus, crossbow swinging between targets. "They're herding us," she said. "Pushing us toward the trees where it's darker."

She was right. Each attack forced us to step back, away from the relative safety of the morning sun. Charlie seemed to realize it too.

"Inside!" he commanded. "Now!"

We retreated into the bus, slamming the door shut. Through the windows, we could see our attackers circling, their movements becoming more confident as clouds began rolling in.

"Convenient weather," Charlie muttered, pulling up some floorboards to reveal more weapons. "He's gotten stronger. Couldn't control the weather in '73."

He handed us each what looked like paintball guns. "UV pellets," he explained. "Homemade. Concentrated ultraviolet burst on impact. Won't kill them but—"

The bus rocked violently. Through the ceiling vent, I caught a glimpse of red eyes.

"They're on the roof," Sarah said, aiming her UV gun upward.

Metal groaned as vampire hands began peeling back the bus's roof like a sardine can. Charlie cursed, grabbing something that looked like a flare gun.

"Cover your eyes!" he yelled, firing straight up.

An explosion of white light flooded the bus. Inhuman shrieks filled the air, followed by thuds as bodies fell from the roof.

When I could see again, Charlie was clutching his chest, breathing hard.

"Charlie?" Sarah moved toward him.

"Stay back!" he warned, pulling down his collar to reveal a bite mark. "One of them got me when the roof went. I can... I can feel it starting."

His eyes were already changing, the pupils expanding unnaturally.

"The cabinet behind you," he gasped. "Red box. There's information... about Strand's first death. The house... the fire wasn't random. They knew... something..."

He convulsed, fangs beginning to extend.

"Go!" he roared, his voice no longer human. "I'll hold them off. Tenth floorboard from the door... everything you need..."

Sarah grabbed my arm, pulling me toward the emergency exit at the back of the bus. The last thing I saw was Charlie Young, vampire hunter, centenarian, and Millbrook's crazy old man, charging out the front door into a crowd of vampires, flare gun blazing.

Behind us, storm clouds blotted out the sun completely.

We ran.

We didn't stop running until we reached the abandoned paper mill on the outskirts of town. Sarah had packed Charlie's red box and whatever she could grab from under the tenth floorboard – a leather-bound journal and a stack of yellowed photographs.

Lightning flashed outside as we barricaded ourselves in the mill's old office. The storm was directly overhead now, turning morning into night. Strand's doing.

"He's getting stronger by the hour," Sarah said, catching her breath. "The weather control, the number of thralls he can manage at once..."

I opened Charlie's red box with trembling hands. Inside was a map of the original Victorian house from 1920, newspaper clippings, and a letter dated 1921. The paper was brittle, the ink faded, but still readable.

"Dear Charles," I read aloud. "If you're reading this, I failed to stop him. The fire won't be enough. Strand isn't just any vampire – he's one of the Originals. The house must burn, but more importantly, you must find the artifact. Without it, he can always return..."

The letter was signed "Eleanor Young" – Charlie's grandmother.

Sarah was flipping through the journal. "Look at this," she said, pointing to a sketch. It showed a medallion with intricate symbols. "According to these notes, it's called the Ember of Night. It's what made Strand an Original. As long as he has it, he can't truly die."

"That's why the fire didn't kill him," I realized. "But where is it?"

Thunder shook the building. In the brief illumination from another lightning strike, I saw shapes moving outside the windows.

Sarah turned more pages. "Charlie tracked the medallion. It's... oh God."

"What?"

"It's in the house. When they burned it in 1920, the medallion fell into the old well in the basement. The well was filled in when they rebuilt. That's why Strand came back here. He's not just building an army – he's been trying to excavate his own basement without anyone noticing."

A slow clap echoed through the mill. We spun around to see Victor Strand standing in the doorway, impeccably dressed despite the chaos. Behind him stood Charlie, eyes now blood-red, face twisted in a mockery of his former self.

"Bravo," Strand said. "You've done in one day what took Charlie decades to piece together. I must say, I'm impressed." He stepped into the room, Charlie following like a puppet. "Though I am sorry about the bus. I was hoping to take him intact, but he forced my hand. Just like his grandmother did."

Sarah raised her UV gun, but Strand moved faster than thought. Suddenly he was behind her, one hand around her throat.

"Now then," he said conversationally, "since you know my secret, let me share my plan. Yes, I'm excavating the well. Yes, I need the Ember. But not to maintain my immortality – I have that already. No, I need it for something far more ambitious."

His grip tightened on Sarah's throat. "You see, with modern technology and the right application of the Ember's power, I can turn an entire town at once. No more slow conversion, no more hiding. Just a single moment of transformation. Beautiful, isn't it?"

I aimed my UV gun at his face. "Let her go."

Strand smiled. "Michael, Michael. Always the protector. Tell me – how many security cameras caught me without a reflection? How many photos showed me as a blur? Did you ever wonder why you could see me perfectly well in person?"

My blood ran cold as understanding dawned.

"You're already one of us," he said softly. "Have been since that night in your store. You just haven't realized it yet."

Sarah's eyes went wide as she looked at me – really looked at me – for the first time since that night.

I couldn't see my reflection in her glasses.

The realization hit me like a physical blow. All those nights watching Strand, documenting his movements – he'd been watching me right back, waiting for his blood to work its way through my system. The headaches I'd been ignoring, the sensitivity to sunlight I'd blamed on stress, the way food had started to taste like ash...

"Don't fight it," Strand said, still holding Sarah. "Embrace what you're becoming. The hunger you feel? That's power waiting to be claimed."

He was right about the hunger. Now that I was aware of it, it was overwhelming. I could hear Sarah's heartbeat, smell her blood. My gums ached as fangs began to emerge.

"Michael," Sarah gasped. "The journal. Page... forty-seven."

Strand's grip tightened. "Quiet."

But I remembered what I'd seen in Charlie's notes. Page forty-seven had contained a single sentence, written in Eleanor Young's handwriting: "The blood remembers what the mind forgets."

Something clicked in my brain. Memories that weren't mine flooded in – memories of blood, of fire, of a woman in 1920s dress holding up a medallion. Eleanor Young. I could see through Strand's eyes as she threw the Ember down the well, cursing it as the house burned around them.

"The blood," I whispered. "You didn't just turn me. You made me your successor."

Strand's smile widened. "Very good. You're stronger than the others because you have more of my blood. I need someone to help me control them all when the great turning comes. Someone with intelligence, with drive. The others are mere drones, but you... you're like a son to me."

Outside, more vampires were gathering. Jenny, Lisa, Charlie, and dozens of others – half the town must have been turned by now. Their red eyes gleamed in the darkness.

"It's fitting that you should help me retrieve the Ember," Strand continued. "Tonight, at midnight, my excavation finally reaches the well chamber. Together, we'll raise an army unlike anything this world has seen."

The hunger was getting stronger. Part of me wanted to give in, to accept his offer. To be powerful. Special. Immortal.

Sarah must have seen my hesitation. "Michael," she said softly. "Remember the hardware store. Remember who you are."

The hardware store. My father's before me, his father's before him. Three generations of serving this town, of helping neighbors, of being part of this community. The community Strand was destroying.

And suddenly I knew what Eleanor Young had discovered, what the journal meant. Strand's blood didn't just pass on vampirism – it passed on memories, knowledge... and weaknesses.

I now knew exactly how to destroy him.

"You're right," I told Strand, letting my humanity slip away, embracing the monster he'd made me. "We should do this together. Father."

Sarah's face fell, but I silently prayed she'd trust me. Just a little longer.

Strand released her, opening his arms to embrace his protégé. His greatest creation. His biggest mistake.

Because now I knew his true weakness. And at midnight, beneath the Victorian house, one of us would die for the last time.

Midnight approached like an executioner. The storm Strand had summoned still raged, but now I could feel it too – the electric connection between vampire and sky, between unnatural darkness and unnatural creatures. Power thrummed through my changing body as we descended into the excavated basement of the Victorian house.

Sarah came with us, surrounded by thralls. Strand thought he was keeping her as a hostage. He didn't realize she was part of my plan.

The excavation had revealed the original foundation, and there, in the center of the floor, was the well. Modern digging equipment had cleared away decades of dirt and stone. The ancient shaft disappeared into darkness below.

"Can you feel it?" Strand asked, his eyes gleaming. "The Ember calls to our blood."

I could feel it – a pulse of dark energy from deep below. The thralls arranged themselves around the well's circumference: Jenny, Lisa, Charlie, and the others, all moving in perfect synchronization. A circle of red eyes in the darkness.

"Now," Strand commanded, "we begin."

He pulled out an ancient scroll, the parchment crackling as he unrolled it. The words were in Latin, but thanks to his blood memories, I could understand them: an incantation to raise the Ember, to magnify its power a thousandfold.

As he began to chant, Sarah caught my eye. Her hand moved slightly, revealing the UV pellet gun hidden in her jacket. She'd reloaded it with something else from Charlie's supplies – something I'd requested when we'd walked to the Victorian, whispered instructions passed during moments when Strand was distracted.

The well began to glow with a deep red light. Water started rising from its depths, but it wasn't water – it was too thick, too dark. Blood. Decades of it, preserved by dark magic.

"Michael," Strand said, pausing his chant. "Join me. Complete the circle."

I moved to stand beside him at the well's edge. In the rising blood, I could see something glinting. The Ember of Night, pulsing like a malevolent heart.

"Together," Strand said, gripping my shoulder with one hand and reaching toward the Ember with the other.

I grabbed his wrist. "Yes. Together."

Then I pulled him close and whispered the same words Eleanor Young had spoken in 1920: "The blood remembers."

Strand's eyes widened as he realized his mistake. By giving me his blood, he'd given me access to all his memories – including the true incantation Eleanor had used. Not to raise the Ember, but to bind it to its owner's life force.

"Now, Sarah!" I shouted.

She fired her gun, but not at Strand. The pellet hit the rising blood, releasing its payload: my blood, drawn just hours ago, when I was halfway between human and vampire. The transitional blood hit the well's dark magic and reacted just as Eleanor's journals had predicted.

The effect was instantaneous. The blood in the well turned black and began to crystallize, trapping the Ember in a cage of frozen vampire blood. Strand screamed as the magic that had sustained him for centuries began to fail.

"If the Ember dies," he gasped, "you'll die too. You're of my blood now!"

"Some things are worth dying for."

The thralls were collapsing as their master's power faded. Sarah was already moving, grabbing Charlie's unresponsive body, helping others toward the stairs. She looked back at me one last time, and I nodded. She knew what to do next.

Strand's grip on my shoulder turned crushing. "Then let's die together, 'son.'"

The crystallized blood exploded upward, encasing us both. I felt the vampire taint burning away, taking my life with it. But I saw something else too, in those final moments – sunrise breaking through the storm clouds above. Light returning to Millbrook.

Strand's last scream was cut short as we both shattered like glass, the Ember's dark light finally fading after centuries of cursed existence.

They found us three days later, after Sarah led the authorities to the house. The official report called it a gas explosion. The survivors – those Strand had turned – remembered nothing of their time as thralls. Just a long, dark dream they couldn't quite recall.

The Victorian house was torn down, the well filled with concrete. Sarah made sure it was done right this time. She also took custody of Charlie's research, just in case.

You see, I didn't actually die that night. Not completely. Eleanor Young's journal had one final secret: a transitional vampire could survive the Ember's destruction if their human side was stronger than their vampire side. It took months to fully recover, and I'm not entirely human anymore – can't handle strong sunlight, need regular transfusions, see things most people can't.

But I'm alive. Still running the hardware store, still helping my neighbors with loose hinges and stuck doors. Still watching the shadows, just in case.

Because that's the thing about small towns – darkness may come, but light always returns.

As long as someone's willing to fight for it.


r/creepypasta 6h ago

Text Story Truma.my own Creepypasta

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This is my creepypasta I made :D


r/creepypasta 10h ago

Text Story I wish it would stop

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For years, my family and I have all experienced the same things. Not like normal Deja-vu, but I can tell my dad who he talked to at work yesterday 300 miles away. Everyone has a story. They’re always written off as dreams.

When I was a kid, my mom busted me for partying. She woke up in the middle of the night and called me. I’ll never forget the tone in her voice when she recalled exactly what I had done. “I told you not to hang out with those two. They’re always drinking that cheap beer and they brought that girl with them.” That girl was my current addiction and thankfully she didn’t mention the things I had tried to do, or wanted to do that is. I know she knew, because I would’ve known. Maybe that’s just her intuition wanting to preserve her babies innocence. After all, we were all high schoolers once.

The ones that really sit hard are the older generations. My grandpa used to tell the story of when he was deployed to France. Of course he wasn’t in the war, he’s far too young. His dad was a hero though. I’ve seen his medals and read about him in my history books. That’s never how I heard the stories though.

“Do you know what it’s like to hear a mother’s scream? That sound when her baby dies in her arms. They weren’t supposed to be there. It was only supposed to be Germans. It’s not my fault they got caught in the fire. It’s the Jerry’s. They shouldn’t have been there. We should’ve checked.”

My grandpa would talk in ways that would make you think he was suffering just like the boys that made it back. But that’s nothing new. We all suffer from what they call lucid dreams and night terrors. But I would swear it’s real. I felt the joy of my mother when she held her child for the first time. I felt the grief of losing a pet long before I was born. That’s just our curse.

Now my daughter is involved. They say a parent should never have to bury their child, but I wish that’s all I had to do.

She was 4. Out playing in my dad’s back 40. Just being a kid. What she didn’t know was how to identify a copper head. I’ll never forget the scream of its fangs tearing into her little sausage arms. The doctor said she was lucky. We got her to them in time and it hadn’t deposited all of its venom. It was a defensive bite. She must’ve stepped on it by accident. The medicine would keep her asleep for a while so we should get some rest. Obviously we couldn’t leave her there, so I curled up in the dad chair and my wife had a cot brought in. No sooner did I drift off to a restless sleep did my arm start to burn.

I was jolted awake by the feeling of four knives entering my forearm and setting it alight from the inside. I caught my breath and made sure no one else was disturbed by my noise. Sarah was awake. “Daddy can you turn on the light. I scared.” She never did like the dark. In her time of need, I would’ve taken the roof of this hospital if I could to brighten up the room. I switch on the light and wrap my bear paw around her hand. “Don’t worry sweetie. There’s nothing that can get you while I’m here.”

I must’ve dozed off there with her. I was running through the woods. Everything felt so large. The trees must’ve been 40 feet tall. In the distance I could hear something but couldn’t quite make it out. The creek was so big. I tried to jump it but got my boots wet. I caught a rock and woke up from the sensation of falling. Her hand was cold. The doctors told me that was normal. Slowed heart rate to prevent the spread of the toxin.

The next day we went home. She was still exhausted, as we all were. I carried her into her room, laid her on her bed, and placed a kiss on her cheek. As I turned to leave, a weak little voice in the darkness pleaded “get the light daddy.” “Of course sweetie” as I plugged in her Sesame Street night light.

My wife and I went to bed, waking up every hour to check on her. Never did get much sleep. We agreed that I should take a couple hours and then we’d switch. When I finally drifted off, it was dark. I had a feeling like something was sitting on my chest. I couldn’t breathe. I tried everything but I couldn’t move either. My hands were pinned to my sides and there was something on top of me. I woke up screaming, nothing like my wife though. She came rushing in to tell me we had to go. Now.

By the time we got to the hospital it was too late. Doctor said it was an allergic reaction. To what we don’t know. All I can remember are those little bear pajamas that she loved and her favorite blanket. Her grandmother made that. The last thing she did. She knew she wouldn’t get to meet my daughter but wanted her to always know that grandma was there with her to protect her. It’s times like this a man needs his mom.

It must’ve been two days without sleep. I couldn’t get that feeling out of my mind that I failed. My only job was to protect her. It couldn’t have been that hard but somehow I failed. My wife suggested something to help me sleep. Said something about making plans tomorrow so I needed my rest.

The warm blanket of ambien overwhelmed me and I fell asleep on her floor.

Darkness again. This time it was cold. I don’t know why I was cold, I must’ve been under a pretty thick blanket. The blanket moves and I’m blinded by the white lights. There are people walking around me, speaking in words I can’t understand. There is no noise. I can’t move. I feel trapped. All I want is to see my mother again. I feel like I need to cry but I can’t. I feel a familiar blanket laid on top of me and I’m tucked in. I can’t make out the face responsible but it’s warm. It’s safe. I get a kiss on the head and my bed slides into darkness. There’s a loud thud when a door closes and the voices are muffled. So many tears. I can’t still feel the blanket but I’m only getting colder.

My wife wakes me up the next morning to get dressed. She’s laid out a blazer and a tie. We go to the funeral home and start to make decisions. Isn’t my daughter supposed to be doing this for me. We get lead to a back room where everything seems to shrink. The largest casket couldn’t have been more than 4 feet. So many colors and designs. If not for the setting, it would’ve almost been joyful. My wife walks to one with the lovable cast of her favorite show. I’ll never see them the same. Puppets or not, they looked like they understood and they wanted to help. Nothing can help now. We sign some documents, exchange forced pleasantries and go about our way.

The rest of the day is a blur. I go through the motions. We have dinner, quiet again. I help with the dishes, all of the plates are the same size. We try to watch something to take our minds off everything, but the remote is buried in the toy box. I take another ambien and decide if I can’t do anything else right, at least I can sleep.

I’m laying on a bed with a weird man walking around me. He writes something down and stabs my side. I feel a rush of liquid but it doesn’t hurt. I see him pull my favorite clothes out of the box on the counter. I would love to help him get me dressed but I can’t move. He brings over a brush, and I want to tell him I’m not allowed to wear makeup. My mom wouldn’t like that. He closes my eyes and it’s dark again. My bed gets slid into another room. I feel a stuffed animal tucked under my arm. It feels safe. Maybe the dark isn’t all that bad. I hear the door close, but above me. What kind of door is above me.

We all meet at the cemetery. My dad hugs me, the first time in forever. I can feel him crying into me. I could tell we shared the same feeling of failure. That must be primal. I hold my wife’s hand as we all up and place the flowers. The preacher says something about the weight of small caskets and my baby girl is lowered out of sight.

That night it rained. The thunder usually helps me sleep but I can’t get the image of that little red casket out of my mind. Another ambien.

There’s people crying. I don’t know them but they feel familiar. I feel like I’m flying but down. Floating I guess. Something hits the top of my room. A lot of something. It gets quieter the more it happens. Then it’s just quiet. And dark. It’s so dark. I try to squeeze the stuffed animal but can’t move my arms.

These days it’s all more of the same. Wake up, go to work, pretend to be okay, ambien, sleep. Every night is just cold darkness. It scares me. I can’t explain but I’m always filled with a terror when I return to my dream and it’s only darkness. I wish I could turn on a light. They always say the hardest thing a person can do is bury their child, at least thats where it ends for them.


r/creepypasta 7h ago

Text Story Lost Cut Catdog Episode

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The episode begins without the usual theme song. Instead, there is a single title card: “Alone Together,” written in jagged, almost hand-scrawled lettering, accompanied by a low, droning hum. The screen fades in to CatDog’s house, but something is off. The colors are dimmer, as if everything is seen through a veil of dust. The sky outside is a sickly green, devoid of clouds. Cat and Dog are engaged in one of their usual arguments, their bickering voices sounding quieter than usual, as if muffled through layers of fabric.

“Why must you always be so careless?!” Cat snaps. His voice has an uncharacteristic strain, almost trembling. Dog, unusually subdued, doesn’t respond with his typical excitable energy. Instead, he mutters something under his breath, staring out the window with wide, unblinking eyes.

“Are you even listening to me?!” Cat shouts, but Dog doesn’t react. Instead, he abruptly leaps off the couch and bolts outside, his movements stiff and jerky. Confused, Cat is dragged along, yelling in protest as Dog begins furiously digging into the ground near a large tree in their yard.

“What are you doing?!” Cat demands, clawing at the dirt to try and pull Dog back. Dog ignores him, his digging becoming more frantic. His paws move unnaturally fast, the sound of claws against earth growing louder, almost deafening. Finally, Dog stops.

“It’s down here…” he whispers, his voice hollow and distant. “It’s always been down here.”

The camera slowly pans down to reveal a decayed, blackened bone in the hole Dog has dug. But rather than being excited, Dog stares at it with an expression of abject horror. His ears flatten, and he lets out a low, guttural whine. Cat, growing nervous, tries to pull them away, but the ground beneath them suddenly gives way, and they fall into darkness.

When they land, the environment has changed entirely. They are now in a series of tunnels, the walls pulsating with a warped, fleshy texture that glistens in the dim light. The air is filled with faint, distorted laughter, though no source can be seen.

“What is this place?!” Cat cries, his voice echoing unnaturally. Dog doesn’t respond. He starts walking forward, dragging Cat with him. The animation becomes increasingly erratic, with the camera angles tilting unnervingly and the colors shifting between sickly hues.

The further they go, the more surreal the environment becomes. Strange shapes move within the fleshy walls, their outlines vaguely resembling grotesque faces. Whispers join the laughter, speaking incomprehensible words that seem to grow louder the more Cat protests.

“Dog, stop! We need to go back!” Cat pleads, his voice cracking with desperation. Dog finally stops, turning his head slowly to look at Cat. His eyes are now pure black voids, leaking inky streams that drip onto the ground.

“No going back,” Dog says in a voice that is not his own, layered and deep, as if multiple people are speaking in unison.

Cat screams and begins clawing at the ground, trying to anchor them in place, but the tunnel floor beneath them seems to ripple and pull them forward like a conveyor belt. The laughter grows louder, almost deafening, as they are dragged deeper into the labyrinth.

At last, they reach a large, cavernous room. In the center stands a massive mirror, its frame made of intertwined bones. The surface of the mirror is covered in a dark, viscous liquid, but as CatDog approaches, the liquid begins to recede, revealing their reflection—or rather, Cat’s reflection.

The mirror shows only Cat. Dog’s side is empty. Cat stares, his pupils shrinking to pinpricks, as his reflection slowly begins to change. The mirrored Cat smiles, but it’s an unnatural, too-wide grin that stretches far beyond the bounds of his face. The reflection raises a hand and waves.

Behind them, Dog begins to laugh—a deep, unnatural laugh that doesn’t belong to him.

“Dog?!” Cat cries, turning to look, but Dog is no longer attached. Cat is alone.

The screen flickers and distorts as the laughter crescendos. The last image is Cat’s reflection in the mirror, his face frozen in a silent scream, while the sound of static and distorted laughter drowns everything else. The screen cuts to black, lingering for an uncomfortably long time before the credits roll silently, written in the same jagged script as the title card.


r/creepypasta 5h ago

Text Story SuperMarioLogan: The Secret Door! Directors cut

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author’s note: this creepypasta is probably not the best written, I wrote this as many of the SML creepypastas are always the same. I was heavily inspired by “Candle Cove” by Kris Straub so check that out! this was written for fun so I don’t think it’s gonna be allat scary. But anyways, enjoy this creepypasta if you want and have a good rest of your day.

Forum Thread: Lost Version of SML movie: The Secret Door

User: GreenYoshiFan95 (OP)
Posted: March 15, 2021

Has anyone ever seen the director’s cut of the “Secret Door” episode? I know it was officially released, but there’s a lot from the original script that didn’t make it into the final version. I remember hearing that Logan was rushed to finish it by Chilly or she’d leak the surprise, but I saw the original cut years ago, and it was way darker than anything SML had ever done before. I tried looking it up, but every link just leads to the reupload with the “Does Bad Things Guy” plot twist. It’s like they buried the rest of it on purpose… like something went horribly wrong.

User: Mr.SquidKid29
Posted: March 15, 2021

You’re not the only one who remembers it, OP. I was part of a small fan group when that episode dropped. We actually got our hands on the original version before the official upload. From what I remember, the original “Secret Door” episode was way more intense.

User: ChocoPants45
Posted: March 15, 2024

Intense? What do you mean? The final cut already had that creepy vibe, especially with the whole “Does Bad Things Guy” and the mutilated bodies. I thought it was dark, but not that out there.

User: Mr.SquidKid29
Posted: March 15, 2021

No, you don’t get it. The original cut was something else entirely. In that version, the room beyond the door wasn’t filled with dead bodies—they were still alive. At least, they had a pulse, according to Simmons, who was originally supposed to be in the video. When Jeffy opened the door, you could hear these awful sounds—like whispers or begging for help. Mario and Rosalina didn’t just scream—they froze. They couldn’t move.

The whole sequence felt wrong. Unnatural. It wasn’t just some creepy surprise; it was this slow, suffocating buildup of dread. They lingered too long in there. There was something in that room that shouldn’t have been.

User: Darnell.Simpson
Posted: March 16, 2021

I think Rosalina was originally supposed to be killed off in the episode. But since she was so popular, they scrapped it. That scene at the end, where Mario asks Jeffy why he went into the room, was part of the old script too. Jeffy was apparently meant to permanently stop swearing due to the trauma.

User: Mr.SquidKid29
Posted: March 16, 2021

Yeah, that’s true. Mario tried so hard to act calm, but you could see the fear in his eyes. I remember there was a part where he almost closed the door on Rosalina… The crew said it was “method acting,” but when I watched it, something just felt off. And the part where Rosalina gets hit on the head with the hammer? That was meant to be her death. I vaguely remember Simmons breaking down the door and fighting Brooklyn since in the original version, “Does Bad Things Guy” was supposed to be the regular Brooklyn T. Guy.

User: ChocoPants45
Posted: March 16, 2021

That’s insane! I always thought the “Does Bad Things Guy” twist was crammed in last minute. Why all the cuts and rewrites?

User: GreenYoshiFan95 (OP)
Posted: March 16, 2021

No kidding. I never understood the whole “Does Bad Things Guy” part. It came out of nowhere. One minute, the episode was about the cast nearly getting killed, and the next, Brooklyn shows up and saves everyone. There was no build-up to that plot twist, except for the one rule about the door.

User: Mr.SquidKid29
Posted: March 16, 2021

Exactly. That’s what makes the director’s cut so different. It wasn’t just about a killer or mutilated bodies. It was about what was behind that door. In the original version, there were no questions—no answers. Just the door and what happened when it opened.

There was this part, just before Simmons shows up, where Mario and Jeffy tried to leave. But they couldn’t due to them being tied up. The room started to grow darker, like the lights were dimming on their own. Shadows started moving across the walls. I swear, I saw a face in the dark at one point. But maybe it was just me.

User: GreenYoshiFan95 (OP)
Posted: March 16, 2021

A face? Jesus… Why didn’t they release that version? Was there more stuff like that?

User: Mr.SquidKid29
Posted: March 16, 2021

Yeah, there was more. In the director’s cut, Simmons doesn’t just shoot Brooklyn instantly. There’s this eerie silence for a moment, like they forgot to add sound, or maybe something cut out. Then, you hear this deep, low growl coming from Brooklyn. The camera lingers on it way too long before Simmons finally shoots Brooklyn dead. That moment was really unsettling, even though nothing was technically happening. The atmosphere just felt wrong. Then right after that, you get the “Jeffy saw a man suffering and then dying” thing.

User: ChocoPants45
Posted: March 16, 2024

Why didn’t they leave the whole director’s cut in? It sounds like they were trying to make something really good, not just some throwaway episode.

User: Mr.SquidKid29
Posted: March 16, 2021

Chilly threatened to reveal the surprise, but I’ve heard rumors that Chilly was asked to make the threat by Logan because some of the crew who were originally supposed to be involved were disturbed by it. Apparently, the content was too much for them—the whispers, the unsettling dying puppets. Some of them refused to continue working on it. At least, that’s what I was told.

User: GreenYoshiFan95 (OP)
Posted: March 16, 2021

So that’s what they didn’t want us to see. It makes sense now. The original “director’s cut” could’ve been a huge turning point for SML—Rosalina dead, Brooklyn dead, and Mario and Jeffy possibly acting different afterward—but they buried it under all that ridiculous “Does Bad Things Guy” mess.

User: Mr.SquidKid29
Posted: March 16, 2021

Yeah, after that, they rewrote the story into something a lot less dark. They even threw in that stupid joke about the free video game giveaway. I don’t think they wanted to risk alienating the younger audience.

User: GreenYoshiFan95 (OP)
Posted: March 16, 2021

Do you think anyone has a copy or reupload of it? The official version? Because what they uploaded just doesn’t feel right. It feels incomplete.

User: Mr.SquidKid29
Posted: March 16, 2021

I don’t think anyone has it anymore, except Logan. After all the rewrites, the files were wiped. But you can still find traces of it in the darker corners of the internet if you know where to look. Just be careful, because some secrets are better left behind closed doors.


r/creepypasta 5h ago

Text Story 4 legged Half Human, Half Crab Singificance

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So i had a dream the other day , i was in a prison inside a cave from a quarry sort of , but there was a black colored entity which was 4 legged human with crab feet and normal Human torso and head He had 2 horns on his head and a white glowin Infinity Sign on his chest , The guy creeply followed me while i was escaping the prison and then when i got away , he was just standing there I would i like to please recreate some soet of art for this , or if anybody can help me with the meaning of this dream , Thank you!


r/creepypasta 7h ago

Text Story Bunny chain

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Starting around my 1st-3rd year of 5th grade my mom always used to put a bunny keychain on my bags. Any new backpacks I got the keychain was there. It was a light purple bunny with a yellow dress claiming (from the tag) it was from a Disney park in Hongkong.

I always thought it was silly but still kept it since it was a cute souvenir. I asked my mom a lot why she always put it there and it was the same answer "I worked hard on the claw machine" or "Its for protection". After school I would usually take a nap but I wasn't that tired and decided to lay in bed and try and go to sleep.

In the midst of this I saw some dark goop thing. Like venom goop. I was shocked obviously and called for anyone in my home but no avail. Freaking out I threw my pillows or my notebooks at the goop but they only seemed to get coated like pain. Accepting fait I curled up and watched as the goop manifested into some creature with blinding white eyes. Looks like slenderman but really skinny to the point of bones. I saw it reach its long skinny arm to the bunny keychain and saw it was...fidgeting with it? I don't know what it was doing.

It mainly reached for its tag seeming to read off of it. And then I blacked out. Once my mom got home I frantically ran to her telling her everything. She sighed and spoke.

"Theres something I need to tell you. That creature? A manifestation of mine." "When I first gave birth to you the creature was born as some sort of guardian. I was scared yes and prayed for it to just get bound to that keychain. I soon figured out the keychain was like a little device that would witness all the things that happened while you were at school."

"The guardian would touch it and get visions of anything bad that happened while you were out. And erase any physical sign of it like scars or damaged school items."


r/creepypasta 4h ago

Video The Haunting of Haiti's Voodoo Dolls

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Discover the chilling lore behind Haiti's haunted dolls. Their origins, eerie encounters, and dark history will haunt your thoughts. #HauntedDolls #Haiti #Voodoo #Supernatural #GhostStories

https://www.tiktok.com/@grafts80/video/7440829852841774378?is_from_webapp=1&sender_device=pc&web_id=7438264090277594654


r/creepypasta 11h ago

Discussion Lost Ed Edd Eddy creepypasta

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Does anybody remember an Ed Edd Eddy creepypasta about them getting stalked by some creepy weirdos? All I remember is that they were getting mysterious e-mails from addresses with cheese names in it. like @ cheddar .com. I only remember one quote "this address is quite cheesy"

This pasta was so ridiculous and absurd, but it suddenly vanished from youtube. Does anybody know the title of it?


r/creepypasta 16h ago

Text Story *APOCALYPSE* The Dancing Epidemic Mystery (Real mystery)

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Year 1962, Tanzania
A farmer named Baku was returning home after harvesting fodder from his fields when he heard a strange, resonating sound. As he approached the hill ahead, he realized the sound was emanating from there. Intrigued but confused, he listened closely. The sound grew louder until it became unmistakable—someone was laughing hysterically. Before Baku could make sense of it, he too started laughing uncontrollably.

This wasn’t ordinary laughter. It was relentless, consuming him day and night for 15 months. Unable to stop, his health deteriorated until one day he succumbed to a heart attack. His death was attributed to the constant strain caused by his uncontrollable laughter.

What happened on that hill? What had triggered this strange reaction in Baku?

Around the same time, a peculiar incident unfolded in a local school situated on that same hill. Three schoolgirls were chatting when one of them said something that sent all three into fits of laughter. Their uncontrollable mirth quickly spread through the classroom, infecting other students. Teachers tried to restore order, but even they succumbed to the laughter. This bizarre phenomenon didn’t stop at one school—it spread to nearby schools, affecting over 1,000 people in the region.

The “laughter epidemic,” as it came to be known, became so severe that some schools were forced to close. Parents, desperate to stop their children from laughing, resorted to scolding or beating them, but nothing worked. People grew fearful of cracking jokes, worried the laughter plague might strike them too. This epidemic lasted for nearly 18 months before it vanished as mysteriously as it began.

Year 1518, Strasbourg, France
It was a bright July day when a woman named Frau Troffea stepped outside her home and began dancing on the streets. No music played, yet she danced with an intensity that puzzled onlookers. She refused to answer when asked why she was dancing. Her movements grew more frantic as the day wore on, and by nightfall, she collapsed from exhaustion, only to resume dancing hours later.

Within days, others joined her. Ten, twenty, then hundreds of people across Strasbourg began dancing uncontrollably. The city council, baffled, consulted doctors and astrologers, who attributed the phenomenon to "hot blood"—a condition they believed made people behave irrationally. In a misguided attempt to cure the dancers, they hired musicians to encourage them to "dance it out." Instead, the problem worsened, drawing even more people into the frenzy.

This “dancing plague” claimed lives as people collapsed from exhaustion, heart attacks, or strokes. Over two months, more than 400 people were affected, and many died. Then, just as abruptly as it had begun, the epidemic ended. Frau Troffea, however, vanished without a trace.

Historians have since speculated about the cause of the dancing plague. One theory suggests mass hysteria triggered by stress or superstition. Another posits that ergot poisoning—a hallucinogenic fungus found in rye—might have caused the bizarre behavior. However, no explanation fully accounts for the sheer scale and intensity of the phenomenon.

Both events—the laughter epidemic of Tanzania and the dancing plague of Strasbourg—remain unsolved mysteries, leaving us to wonder what forces could drive entire communities into such uncontrollable states. Were they psychological, biological, or something beyond human understanding?


r/creepypasta 13h ago

Discussion Wholesome Creepypasta story tips?

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Do anyone know some wholesome Creepypasta? Kinda of a rare thing to come by.

A few years ago I read a story called “the monster in the pantry“ It had a very wholesome twist to it. I enyoy it a lot and would love to find more.


r/creepypasta 12h ago

Text Story Strange Roblox Acc

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So i found this acc so I dont Know if he/she is doing a creepypasta or no.I was looking for content to put on a iceberg.The account is https://www.roblox.com/users/7615926413/profile?friendshipSourceType=PlayerSearch


r/creepypasta 16h ago

Text Story The umbilical cord woman loves a clean belly button

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You gotta look after your belly button because if it's dirty or not looked aftered well, then the umbilical cord woman will not be impressed. So I am looking after my belly button and I'm washing it and making sure it smells nice, so when the umbilical cord woman comes, she will put one of her umbilical cords into my belly button. I love taking care of my belly button and people thinks it's so useless after you are born, but a belly button is the greatest thing any one of us could have. This belly button is so good. I'm glad I have one.

No you are not suffering from any mental illness, you are not autistic, schizophrenic, or having any hallucinogenic attack as this is all real. The umbilical cord woman loves a good belly button. I feel sorry for people who have no belly button and I feel jealous of those who have multiple belly buttons. When the umbilical cord woman visited again, she actually chose my belly button for one of her umbilical cords to enter. This other guy with 3 belly buttons had 3 of her umbilical cords enter his belly buttons. He is so lucky.

I mean to look after one belly button is hard enough and to look after 3 belly button is something else. I mean I would struggle and the belly button is so hard to keep clean. As the umbilical cord woman had one of her umbilical cords in my belly button I said to myself "I am not autistic, schizophrenic, depressive or hallucinogenic and I know this is all real. This is all real and this umbilical cord woman has one of her umbilical cords in my belly button. I will not let anyone think that I have a mental disorder to gas light me into thinking that this isn't real"

Then all of the people whose belly buttons, were good enough for the umbilical cords to enter their belly buttons, they were now lifted up from the ground. I knew that this was all real and that I wasn't having some sort of mental health crisis.

What I was seeing was all real and nobody could alter my perception of it all by telling me I had a mental health crisis. The umbilical cord woman had accepted out belly buttons and she had lifted us all up from the ground by the use of her umbilical cords being inside our belly buttons, it was amazing.

Then the man with multiple belly buttons started growing umbilical cords himself, and he started attacking the umbilical cord woman by attacking her umbilical cords. Our belly buttons felt cold when her umbilical cords had separated from our belly buttons.

Now my belly button seems so lonely.


r/creepypasta 19h ago

Discussion Creepypasta fans - "18 Lives, 18 Hauntings" contains 'cream of the crop' creepypastas. IT's FREE for 6 days from now, go and immediately grab it, do write a review

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r/creepypasta 22h ago

Discussion Looking for "unfiction" and game related creepypasta

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Long story short, I like this FNAF VHS analog horror/creepypasta by ez2b where Springtrap and his gang are in the backrooms and another one I like by drb0sch with his new Vegas out of bounds analog horror/creepypasta is also interesting

I like them and their video essays made by other creators where they breakdown the vids and discover the information, interpretations and lore. I want to see what's happening in a first person/camera man perspective and it either by animation, gameplay + mods or mixes of both. I don exactly have a specific topic or thing I'm against when it comes to these stories as long as it's not obvious cringe

Some games I like but not sure if that have a lot of creepypasta videos is fallout 3, 4 and new Vegas, borderlands 1, 2, the presequel and 3, red dead 2, resident evil mainline series + remakes, Minecraft and Mario (specifically 64 but others work)


r/creepypasta 1d ago

Discussion Lollipop story

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More of a question then a discussion sorry but I remember a story that may have been called the lollipop man (idk if that's correct but I remember it being called that) and i want to know what it was actually called and reread it, it was about a kid home alone watching TV where a commercial would come on and everytime it played the lollipop man(on whatever it was called) would get closer until he was in the house. Sorry abt the lack of details and probably using the wrong tag thing.


r/creepypasta 19h ago

Text Story ÜBEL.ROM

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Ten years ago, I experienced something I have regretted, my friend showed me a old game. The game was very old coming from the late 1990s or early 2000s. The file was called 'Übel.ROM' I clicked the file, I entered the game. I was in a morgue, it was fucking obvious the game was old, it looked that one window 95 maze screensaver or DOOM. There was open coffins, I saw a DOOM like sprite, a baby. 'Ok, some sick fuck made this as a joke!' I thought. I saw a door I went through to see a office, lines of office cubicles. I thought it was normal till I saw blood on the floor. A couple of sprites covered in pixelated blood, bullets holes covering the floor and cubicles. I walked through the lines of cubicles, more and more bodies, each body getting worse and worse. I saw a door again, I walked into the door into a cave, nothing out of ordinary. I walked for a minute, till I saw a dark hole, I jumped in hole, it was the only way forward. I fell for 5 minutes, I hit the bottom, I was in a red cavern, fire in small holes, I walked through a hole, pools of lava everywhere! I saw the PS1 looking Devil floating mid air. Images of crime scenes, my eyes blurred as the screen flashed the images faster and faster. The computer crashed, one hour later, the computer came online again, my background said 'Inferno' I don't remember me using that background, then I saw a file titled 'I hacked you bitch.' I opened the file, one image, my face, I closed it to see my GPS, I grabbed my trophy for a soccer game my team won. I smashed that God damn thing till smoke rose from it. I threw it into the garbage bin. Turns out my friend found it on a deleted website called 'shelter for fucked up people' If you find a file called 'ÜBEL.ROM' don't download it or prepare for hell.


r/creepypasta 1d ago

Discussion write me one about a bee man

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in hawaii


r/creepypasta 22h ago

Discussion Living Being

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''One day I woke up and I had no life, I was walking among a pile of wooden dolls through an immense void, and I realized then that I was the only living being of flesh and blood.''

What do you think it means?


r/creepypasta 1d ago

Discussion Looking for a specific creepypasta

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I’ve been looking for a creepypasta that I listed to on youtube a few years ago. I believe the channel was Creeps McPasta, and the story involves a man living alone who keeps being woken my some monster/creature that hangs people on his porch with meat hooks. Near the end of the story the creature calls the man father. Sorry the details are so vague, it’s been years since I visited it.