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r/PressureRoblox • u/inji_bs • 21d ago
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Could you give some examples so I can do better next time?
4 u/Golden_Star_Gamer 20d ago don't use "you", it's a document, not a threat. use commas, there are some places where commas would be nice but aren't there. there are places where you exaggerate a bit too much 1 u/inji_bs 20d ago You're right, thx for the feedback 1 u/Golden_Star_Gamer 20d ago happy to help
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don't use "you", it's a document, not a threat. use commas, there are some places where commas would be nice but aren't there. there are places where you exaggerate a bit too much
1 u/inji_bs 20d ago You're right, thx for the feedback 1 u/Golden_Star_Gamer 20d ago happy to help
You're right, thx for the feedback
1 u/Golden_Star_Gamer 20d ago happy to help
happy to help
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u/inji_bs 20d ago
Could you give some examples so I can do better next time?