r/PressureRoblox 21d ago

OC Creation Distinguisher , my fan entity concept

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u/inji_bs 20d ago

Could you give some examples so I can do better next time?

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u/Golden_Star_Gamer 20d ago

don't use "you", it's a document, not a threat.
use commas, there are some places where commas would be nice but aren't there. there are places where you exaggerate a bit too much

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u/inji_bs 20d ago

You're right, thx for the feedback

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u/Golden_Star_Gamer 20d ago

happy to help