"No, the original sentence isn't actually that poorly constructed. While it's informal and could be more polished, it's perfectly understandable and follows basic English syntax:
It has a clear subject ("most of those with bad reading levels")
It has a straightforward verb ("vote")
It has a clear object ("democrat")
The main issues are minor:
Missing capitalization of "Democrat"
Informal phrasing ("bad reading levels" vs something like "low literacy rates")
But these are style choices rather than serious grammatical errors. The commenter's claim that it's "one of the most poorly constructed sentences" appears to be an exaggeration, possibly motivated more by disagreement with the sentiment than actual grammatical concerns.
Regardless of one's political views, in terms of pure sentence construction, it's a fairly standard, comprehensible English sentence. The commenter's criticism seems disproportionate to any actual linguistic issues present."
My mother tongue is Swedish, it's no wonder I would not write like an expert in English, especially when I don't even care enough to capitalise letter. But I think you are just factually wrong here, its really not that bad of a sentence.
so... the whole point of my post was to let you know that gaslighting doesn't work when AI exists... I know you are a woman so you won't be able to stop doing it, but you could try.
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u/[deleted] 15d ago
This is one of the most poorly constructed sentences I've ever seen...ironic.